The player

(The player knocks and enters the G.M office)

The player- " I'm here rgt now to let you know i mean every word i say and to prove that any time you have that
minute put me in a match.......... Thank you!!!!"

hey man like the will to be put in a show but this is way to short

Try busting into the gm's office you know rant about how your the future of the company and you deserve the chance to prove your self but it has to be more than three lines come on man

Mr. Biggs wrote:hey man like the will to be put in a show but this is way to short

Try busting into the gm's office you know rant about how your the future of the company and you deserve the chance to prove your self but it has to be more than three lines come on man

he has a point her is a semi good edit
(Player knocks and walks inside the G.M`s office)
Darkness: Why are you here?
Player: I would like to show I should get what i deserve.
Darkness: Why?
Player: because I have more to offer so put me in a match tonight.
Darkness: Whoa slow down I will see what I can do for you.
Player: Ciao
(Player leave the G.M`s office in a civilised fashion)
see what you could add to make it better and longer Player. Be more descriptive.