The player

Go down

The player

Post  The player on Thu Sep 17, 2009 3:23 pm

(The player knocks and enters the G.M office)

The player- " I'm here rgt now to let you know i mean every word i say and to prove that any time you have that
minute put me in a match.......... Thank you!!!!"
avatar
The player

Posts : 7
Join date : 2009-09-17

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: The player

Post  Mr. Biggs on Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:29 pm

hey man like the will to be put in a show but this is way to short Rolling Eyes

Try busting into the gm's office you know rant about how your the future of the company and you deserve the chance to prove your self but it has to be more than three lines come on man Neutral
avatar
Mr. Biggs

Posts : 25
Join date : 2009-09-20
Age : 24

View user profile

Back to top Go down

why dude seriously

Post  thereaper33333 on Mon Oct 05, 2009 3:40 am

Mr. Biggs wrote:hey man like the will to be put in a show but this is way to short Rolling Eyes

Try busting into the gm's office you know rant about how your the future of the company and you deserve the chance to prove your self but it has to be more than three lines come on man Neutral
he has a point her is a semi good edit
(Player knocks and walks inside the G.M`s office)
Darkness: Why are you here?
Player: I would like to show I should get what i deserve.
Darkness: Why?
Player: because I have more to offer so put me in a match tonight.
Darkness: Whoa slow down I will see what I can do for you.
Player: Ciao
(Player leave the G.M`s office in a civilised fashion)
see what you could add to make it better and longer Player. Be more descriptive.
avatar
thereaper33333

Posts : 29
Join date : 2009-09-17
Location : AUstralia

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: The player

Post  Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum